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CodrutTurcanu
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 9:42 am Post subject: Read This FIRST!
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kljcoach
Joined: 31 Oct 2007
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Location: UK
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 11:55 am Post subject: www.internet-business-toolkit.com
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Hi this is the first of my sites...
www.internet-business-toolkit.com
All positive comments very welcome!
Seriously, I'd be grateful for all feedback.
Have a great day!
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Do you want to know the simple secrets to success on the Internet? You know what to do next...
www.internet-business-toolkit.com
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hanleo46
Joined: 26 Oct 2007
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 5:38 pm Post subject: Would love to get a look at the actual page!!
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Hello Keith
Your slidein popover will not go away,,,and it covers most of the page!!
I am using IE7 browser.
It is just annoying....or did you intend for it to be filled before allowing me to see the page partially covered by it
Sorry..........but slide it in, and give me option to close it
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brightwings
Joined: 31 Oct 2007
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Location: Westchester County, NY
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Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 5:59 pm Post subject: Benefits highlighted?
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I like this concept. It's clean and focused. What I'd like to see highlighted better are no more than 3 of the top benefits for each of the options -- and a better explanation of how I can tell which option will be the best one for me to choose.
In other words, could you make it brain-dead simple for the visitor to take action?
Good work here! I hope you get the results you want from this site.
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MoneyPlus
Joined: 31 Oct 2007
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Location: Big Apple - New York City
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Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 1:48 am Post subject: Re: www.internet-business-toolkit.com
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| kljcoach wrote: |
Hi this is the first of my sites...
www.internet-business-toolkit.com
All positive comments very welcome!
Seriously, I'd be grateful for all feedback.
Have a great day! |
OK, you asked for it.
Here is my critique.
First off, I like your site. No B.S. or hype. Right to the point.
Nicely laid out.
A couple suggestions.
Your opening statement...
"If you had access to the best information, resources, reports and tools,
would you be able to create yourself more wealth?
It would flow better if instead you said ...
'would you be able to create more wealth for yourself?'
A minor difference, but the flow is much better.
Next, I need to read your site with my sunglasses on. Too many colors.
If you want to make it easier for people to read, change the blue to black.
Get rid of the light blue and don't use so much bolding. It loses it's effectiveness when overused.
Your header is very nice... well done. You have your page links right underneath the header
and then again at the bottom. Just use one or the other, not both.
Lastly, personalised should be spelled personalized.
Hope that helps.
Best Wishes,
Carl Willoughby
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