Welcome Email Critique #1 – Sean Si @ Seo-Hacker.com

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Believe it or not, welcome emails generate 4x more opens and 5x more clicks than regular email marketing campaigns (newsletters or promos).

welcome-emails

Source: MarketingProofs.com

That’s the main reason why you should spend the most of your time on the welcome email.

Today I’m helping Sean Si @ Seo-Hacker boost his conversions (opens and clicks). Check out these welcome email hacks below.

Hack #1 – From: field

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If you want to be known as Sean from SEO hacker, it’s OK to go with this, otherwise be sure to use your full name (build your personal brand first) followed by your business brand.

Hack #2 – Subject line

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I suggest email personalization in the email subject line. Here’s why

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Source: CampaignMonitor

A better line would be…

John, you’re in! SEO Hacker awaits you…

Hack #3 – Email body: HTML

I suggest to split test A/B with two different versions. Text gets more opens. Here’s why:

text-vs-html emails

Source: HubSpot

Hack #4 – Intro Message

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Intros can make or break your email marketing success.

Add some “intro” excitement. And always brand yourself first.

Hey, Sean @ SEO-Hacker.com here.

I’m super excited you’ve took the time and decided to join our SEO Hacker community.

This shows me you’re super serious and down to business. You rock!

Within 2 days, I’ll send you the link to some of my BEST CONTENT EVER. You’ll not want to miss it.

Subject line says: “You’ve got mail (SEO tip #1)”. So keep an eye for it!

Hack #5 – Call to Action

The call 2 action can make or break your clicks conversion. Do it right.

call-to-action-emails

It looks like Sean is having 4 distinct call to actions in this email alone — this is something which I DO NOT RECOMMEND as it’ll decrease your conversions! Only focus on ONE CALL 2 ACTION!

Anyway, here’s how I’d re-write this… and still make it effective…

#1 – Want to TALK or need SEO HELP? E-mail me @ ___ or HIT “reply”.

#2 – Are you on Twitter? Let’s connect right away. Here’s where you can follow me ___

#3 – Are you in Metro Manila? Contact me as I love meeting fellow digital marketers and entrepreneurs.

Hack #6 – the P.S.

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The first P.S. is not needed as most users will know how to ‘whitelist’ their email anyway.

The P.P.S. — I’d make this enticing and give readers a special 10% discount or whatever. Show them you appreciate their subscription.

I’d re-write it to be more specific like this…

Check out our SEO e-Book which was downloaded 1,000’s+… “8 Actionable On-Site Optimization Techniques to Boost your SEO”

You’ll get 10% OFF as a THANK-YOU note for joining my list 😉

That’s it.

Now! HIRE ME to write or rewrite your emails and BOOST your email marketing conversions too; check these testimonials and see some samples.

Don’t let competitors win your subscribers over e-mail. Contact me right away to boost your opens and clicks!

 

 

 

 

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Codrut Turcanu
I am a business growth marketer and blog post writer who specializes in turning underperforming blogs into client magnets for SEO agencies. Trusted by Shane Barker, Flying V Group, Ahrefs, OptinMonster, Serplines and 50+ other clients. Priorities: Faith. Family. Finances. Connect with me via LinkedIn and X (Twitter)
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